“ This seat must not be revealed to the world.” I said. I am a big orange orangutan that likes this This week we have used another picture as motivation for our writing. We had a story starter and then we had to carry on the story.
What I like about my writing is that i humans invading there land.
I need to improve on that i need to write a story not just the animals talking.
Here is my writing about Animal Town.
comfortable seat I don’t think i'm meant to sit here though It says VIP only seat wow seats are really rare in our animal world but cars they cost animal dollars animal dollars are known to humans as money for them money Is rare but for us It’s uncommon my name is bow the orangutan.
“I don’t know where to go so I’m just gonna walk to the van for a ride”. I said. “You big monkey ape thingy you are too big for this thing!!” shouted the lion. “We don’t want monkey thingy's here,” said the sloth slowly crouching down into his hatch.
“Let’s drive this thing to the moon,” I said. “But we can’t that’s impossible to do,” said the sloth. “He can’t do that anyhow he’s not aloud in this van he’s too fat! For this hunk of metal”. said the parrot. “Squawk! Squawk! Squawk! Squawk!” said the parrot.
“Oh come on this can’t go to the moon!” I said. “Yes it can’t go to the moon,” said the lion. “Then can it go to the sun?” “No it will burn us to bread crust in one minute OK!,” said the sloth and the lion. Then the lion went sprinting down the road to get his animal car.
Lion came back with his animal car with weird shaped towels named clothes. “I don’t think he is cool with those weird shaped towels on,” said the parrot. Since I’m an animal I can do anything except for swimming because I’m too fat to float on my own. “Humans are invading our territory, get cover!” “Quick hide guys we don’t want to end up in something called a cage or zoo thingy,” quietly whispered the parrot. And the parrot slowly sneaked across to its home. “I hear dinner!!” shouted the human. “Why can’t we use my animal car?” asked the lion. “Nope we are going to hide we won’t just run out of here! They will see us uh i think they heard me,” said the sloth. “I hear a sloth,” said the human. “Yup they heard you, next time just whisper.” I said. “I also didn’t know that humans existed this is my first time seeing one of these creatures,” said the sloth. “Guys this sign is a lie this is an animal free place,” said the human. “Um there's a lion in the van looking at us furiously,” said the three brothers. “Anyways why would we wanna eat a sloth if there was one or a lion, that’s just wrong.”